thats really deep...tell it like it is...nice

Love it. The last two lines are perfect.

You can only think so much about it, an sometimes never come to a conclusion. I loved it.

Very good! I really like this poem, it's sad and really makes you think of all the things you wish could happen again...anyway, good work. Thanks for you review of my poem, too!

liked the cat part...was cute. liked the end...i need my heart to be free of some1 too

This is just fantastic, absolutely beautiful. I had tapped out my fav. stories list but this is definitely worth keeping close to the heart. Everyline wraps around you like the cat you speak of in the poem.

That's so great. I really love your poem, especially it's about sleeping too. You have got so much talent.

Really gets across the freedom of sleep.

awesome poem. you had some great imagery in here. i love the hair part; i could really relate to the comfort you are longing for in this poem. thanks for the read!

This is very powerful. I like the part about wanting to let your hair down.

I relaly like that ending and the part about the cat and hair.. awesome poem

love it, love it love it love it! the first line really caught my attention, its great.