I really love this poem. As a fellow Lilith poet, it's nice to see other's view of her :-)

Wonderful! I could make no suggestions, I think it's perfect!

I adore the allegories, specially the doves. Lilith is such fascinating figure and your poetry is so good.

This is a great poem. I can actually visualize Lillith's journey. Keep up the great writes Melisande

Wow, very good. I love how the rhyming and the beat flow, and it's lovely how you depicted the scene so well. Very interesting too, I never knew Lucifer had a wife (is it Lucifer, Satan you're talking about? Not 100% sure of that, I'm used to calling him the Devil/Satan and stuff). Good job, keep it up!
PS. Thanks for the review! I've really got to check out that Irving Berlin guy!