This is touching. I love this poem! 'Specially the name. The writing is unique and creative.

I really like the title for this one. It's not a line from your poem, something that most people tend to do. I like it also because it seems like something your ex might have said to you in the past. One thing though... in your poem you wrote "rain drips" instead of "rain drops". Just thought I'd point that out.
"just an agony lining my veins
like plaque on teeth" I like the first line there, but the second just seems kinda iffy... I dunno, I dont like the visual of plaque on teeth. ;;
Ok thats all. By the way, thanks for the comment on my poem. :)
Bekkah