Wow very long first chapter. But its good. I like it!
Callie
Could u R&R my story A Shred of Hope?

This was a little long but I liked it since I like how you used your imagination and the story really spoke to me. The characters were interesting and I loved the writing style. Can you read my stories and my friend chibichocobo's Dreamscapes chapter by chapter? She'll review all your works if you do. Peace up A Town.
G-Unit
Ashley

Holy Crap was this long...my eyes hurt. It was good and I like it, keep writing. Would you mind reviewing my story Fire, Ice and Stars?
Grazie,
~hottgoddess~