hey! this is such a nice poem. i like the emotions expressed in this. there are spelling mistakes but they can be fixed: 4th stanza, last line-"jelaousy" is JEALOUSY and same stanza, line 5- "thes" should be "these". besides those, this poem is great.

This is my favorite of your poems...I forgot to say that in my other review...You make me look so lazy and horrid at writing with how wonderful all your poems but especilly this one seems to be. I love the visulization that I get from it