Love it! Well written, and flows amazingly! Great Poem! :)

LOVE It!

Wow. This is one of my favs. of yours so far, I mean, it's really good. great job with this.

nice message, flows really well, even though i dont really like rhymin in poems anymore (seems too forced when i do it), thanks for the reviews, no u ARENT included in those few, u were polite when u reviewd, and kept an open mind. thank you.
The King of the Assclowns
p.s. been tryin to review this for a while, but fictionpress seems screwy these days, sorries.

Hey. About your questions in the one review. Um i didn't make my profile. My friend Jade R. Black did. She into the whole British stuff. Me? I'm proud to be an American. No cliche meant.
Love,
Hobbit of doom.
keep it up and please R&R every now and then.

eh i don't really like the rhyming but i'm into unstructured poetry so don't take that personally. Otherwise well-written, i'll take a look at some of your other work.

Okay, so I THOUGHT I had just reviewed this, but it didn't go through. The reason I hadn't reviewed until today is that my comp (or maybe this site) is fickle and I got an error message when I tried. I love all your poems, especially this one! Great writting...keep it up!

I've just finished reading a few of your poems. I like how you can write so simplistically and yet manage to put such a profound message into it at the same time (such as in this one). I hope to read future works from you. You seem to have a talent for writing.