   Moonjava 2005-09-12 . chapter 1Very pretty. I like it. |
 Forget-The-Sorrow 2004-12-31 . chapter 1LOVE IT! |
 daphnegray78 2004-12-04 . chapter 1This paints a really nice picture. Great work!
~Daphne~ |
 Sun Chime 2004-11-24 . chapter 1Nice. I like the imagery...and you're a Bush hater? YAY! Me too, me three, me four...let's start a club (jk!) Getting back to your work, i like the simplicity, it hits you harder than you think and its swirls around in your head till you can taste it. Good, good! |
 Aslan Israel 2004-11-23 . chapter 1Beautiful descriptions. |
 Lonely-River-Boy 2004-11-22 . chapter 1Very nice Awesome write!!
LRB |
 pentuprage 2004-10-25 . chapter 1Coolness...hope the other review went through. Been having probs with this site lately. BTW, it's a haiku by my standard. A drable is 100 words and is more like a stary. Good job on this and the rest of your poems! |
 Sublime Rhapsody 2004-10-16 . chapter 1Reall sweet and simple. Great job! |
 horse_lover53 2004-09-05 . chapter 1 Oh, good job. it's pretty |
 JQ3 2004-09-05 . chapter 1This creates a peaceful image. Cool.
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