not only is this you, but also is me.

You got me in writing, and expressed it well.

nice job.

-Darkshadow

Once again, your dark brilliance shines through.

A bit strange at first, but I like it. You give a clear picture of the girl. The switch of omniscient POV to first is well done and adds a nice effect. Good job. _

wow that was beautiful! i can so so so relate! its great! i know exactly what you mean. i love this! and thanks so much for your review, im glad you liked the song and were able to relate.