That was a light and humorous story, I loved it.

This is creative and very amusing. I can't wait to read the rest. I love your sense of humor.

Awesome story! It was very funny!

Well, I must say it was definately amusing ^_^. Even a little bit of a Austin Powers bit there in chapter 2. Emerald Banana? ... what were you smoking when you came up with that, and have ya got enough to share? >P I'm kidding, great story all around, albiet short, but I'm guessing it was intended to be short. ^_^;;

Yeah, but that broom can be brutal. I like how this story turned out. And gee, the Nameless Guard#1 got named instead of fried. And I could see the flunkies sitting back and watching the action without lifting a finger.

You have a way with character names. Captain Chit, alright! Does the Namelsess Guard #1 have a shirt with that strange symbol on it that looks like a target?

The causual dinner date was cute, too.

I like Sinidrar, but I am partial to evil wizards. This was a funny little piece. The funny thing is, I was thinking about one of your stories when you updated this one. Strange, eh?

Excellent! Wonderfully so! You should submit this somewhere... It's perfect!If you ever do another... I'll come read it!Gryph

wonderful! Magic mirrors, nameless guards and meat pies. Truely a work of genius!

*laughs* That's great! A dental plan... *shakes head*Gryph

Hilarious story! Update soon! School is evil, see ya there tomorrow!

This is extremely amusing! I loved every second of it. Nameless Gaurd # 1 is my favorite character! Awesome!
~ME~

Brilliant. What I love most about this fic is that it is not written tedious. It is to the point in its storytelling, which makes it a lot easier to read on a computer screen. It's also just plain hilarious.
And you're right. School *is* evil.

I'm sry that school is evil! Please update soon! And I love ur story! BYE!

Excellent! I really enjoyed this. You havee a great talent for randomness and unexpectedness. Very creative how Sinidrar won over Taun as his minion by telling him about the dental plan. And Taun is a good guy, really. He just wants what's best for his family, minion or gaurd. Awesome. Please update soon and keep this splending humor you have going.