Some parts I loved:
"Looking closer, I noticed that the blonde had the curves in all the right places. Her boobs weren’t really that big and I could see a few small wrinkles around her eyes, but I didn’t mind. I felt my pants tighten. Nope, I didn’t mind at all."
"Somehow, this made her even more appealing."
This following line of dialogue got me really intrigued for more: "“Good night, Mr. Eyes.”" I really want to know why he's called that.
Good show!