Had to go back to some of your older work as well. Love this :) The rhyming is good and it flows well. Great wokr.

XxXKristie MarieXxX

Concidering that this is your first... I'm glad you got better... except for the fancy feast one ya no da one wit da big fat whire fluffy cats... but I haven't read them all... (and I don't think I could ever do so so...) (nor do I plan to anyway...)

"Is it there amgong the trees?

Or is deep in ocean blue?"

Really liked those questions. Where is love indeed. I've wrote about it, but still haven't found it.

Yusuf

I really liked this.

Nicely written. The age old quest for love, brilliantly portrayed. Keep looking and keep writing-Keith Andrew

where is the love? indeed, good stuff... straight to the point and message

...the guy you fall in love with, will kick ass at being cool, and stuff. Or maybe, he will trick you, use you and then leave you broken, then you will write a very good poem about it, because I know you are more than capable of that. I wrote a poem about someones words getting the better of you and, in a way, brainwashing you into believing them... which would certainly be the case if a guy were to take advantage of you, he'd use his words to overpower you. I'm certainly not saying that will happen. I know that you have to get your heartbroken though if you haven't already because it is very inspiring for writing poetry. Don't get used though, boys are dumb, throw rocks at them. Ok then, time for me to hit the old... dusty trail. Keep-keep truckin'.

Couple of spelling mistakes, but a good poem. I liked the fifth line and the use of questions.