 HyperKat 2004-09-06 . chapter 1I really like this...I can relate to it, and you just tell it so well...I like how you kind of alter what you needed throughout the poem, and at the end "And an ending is all I need..." I liked that because it seems like theres no resolution or ending to the problem, it just lingers around in your mind, and drives you crazy. Nice. I like it. |