The last line was my most favorite. Blackened heart is very descriptive. Please read and review my stuff.

strange but good! o! and the attic is not shit!

wow... i like your poem. I like how you shape it and the pace of the poem.

I love the tempo/pace of this poem. As well as the format you put on it, great work!

This is the first of ur work ive read. I didnt dare read some of the other stuff as it sounded scary but judging by this work i will have to bring up the courage at some point, i like the poem, 'tis cool and has good rhythm. Good imagery. Im not a writer really.

yea this is depressing... but I really like the organization. It gives a unique meaning...
I am...
Angst
Dizzy and unfamiliar.
...sad
...alone
...death
Wonderful language toward the end too.
thanks a lot for the awesome review!

Damn, and I thought I was emo! Not saying emo is a bad thing, we all have our moments. this poem was pretty good, I wish I could write music cause I would like ot experiment making that ao song. Does that make me weird? Maybe. Do I care about being weird? Not really.