Reviews for El Hombre Afilado
Anya Tempest 12/19/05 . chapter 3
Again - this was nice, but still as blunt as a large brick. D

No worries. I thought that the writing style is improving gradually as it goes on.
Aedyn Star 7/7/05 . chapter 1
thats interesting. i like your title. The man something, what does afilado mean?