| Reviews for Smile, Smile: A Lullabye |
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firehair-222 9/6/04 . chapter 1aww, i wish it was always that easy to smile. i like the format. good job -firehair |
Pathy 9/5/04 . chapter 1The Nymph's Reply to the Shepherd: Sometimes there is room for tears, And sometimes one cannot smile; You cannot always calm my fears, Not even for a short while. Will you be able to stand beside me When I can do nothing but frown? Will you be there knowing you cannot be The thing that gets me up from down? You cannot be my all, my everything... And there is no way I can be yours. People need so much more than one thing For pure happiness to be secure. |
CaramelCream 9/5/04 . chapter 1Short and sweet. That was a great lullabye and very well written. Good work. keep it up. *CaramelCream* |
Faithless Juliet 9/5/04 . chapter 1Thats sweet, a genuine moto to be followed. Keep up the good work. Much love, Juliet. |