i remember this :-) sorry i was away for so long. :-) thanks for reveiwing me. will you pretty please continue eternity? that is my favorite. keep on writing!

sincerly your freind kashe

Cool ending. It had a unique twist to it! I like how your ended where readers can decide what happened to Kaori.

Cool...

Awesome, I love it!

Blink blink. Wow. THat was great. At first I didn't like the ending. I'm like 'What?' then I read what you wrote at the bottom and I didn't just not like the ending... I LOVE THE ENDING!
But you MUST post up the sequal! Not anytime really soon or anything... but someday... soon...not a LONG time from now but... Well hope you know what I mean. This is a GREAT story. I'm going to check out your other thing s now. Caongrats on finishing your story! (I've never finished one either... :-P)
Sincerly Kashe

I understand how everything leads to the prolouge. I have read a lot of stories like that. Erg... stupid pop-ups... NO I DID NOT WIN A FREE X-box!...and WHO wants a free RAZER? sorry, I'll be back to read the last cahpter in a minute! :^P

(I'm sorry, it still won't let me sign in. from now on...just know it's me k? sorry)
hey, i do like this chapter. it was a little fast but i know you want this to be a short story so thats ok. you could give a hint that the angel and Kioari (I'm not spelling that right, I know) were like talking louder, and i would give a reason to why a crowd was gathering... anyhow, good chapter, I need to read the last 2!

you had better write a sequel! the story certainly does need telling! sorry, i just finished reading your story, and it was so awesome! ttyl. couldn't think of anything to critique.
Sitchwell

you had better write a sequel! the story certainly does need telling! sorry, i just finished reading your story, and it was so awesome! ttyl. couldn't think of anything to critique.
Sitchwell

Hey! This is actually okay! A bit confusing in parts but actua;lly understandable. The Angels thing was quite strange because aren't angels supposed to be all good, they can't be good if they start earth tremors and smash windows. Just a wee bit confuzzled. and what happened to the guy in the end? The one with no name? :s

That was good. Really, really unexpected, in a completely good way. Good good good. Right...on to the more useful comments...I loved the ending. Poor guy, they all think he's gone mad, when he's just really confused. But yeah, in case you haven't figured it out yet, I liked it a lot and will read the sequel when and if it comes out. And that is a hint, I do believe. :D

hey, this is great! btw, hope u can read my story. thanks! :)

wow! that was so good. i can't think of anyhting wrong with it except everything moves kindof fast, and i guess that's how a short story works. it's really good! i can't wait till the next chapter! see yous later!
Sitchwell

wow! that was so good. i can't think of anyhting wrong with it except everything moves kindof fast, and i guess that's how a short story works. it's really good! i can't wait till the next chapter! see yous later!
Sitchwell

>_< so now what happens everything's destroyed from her anger and we're back to the prologue...i bet causing massacres like that is a good way to keep her out of heaven