wow, I have been in love with this story ever since you wrote it, and i am so glad i got a chapter two, I'm hoping that Chapter 3 will become available soon

This is really good. Original idea, great twists. Realistic. I like it.

This is cool, its nice to know there are 15yr old assasians out there...jk.

Great story. Interesting subject. I really like your style of writing. I think you might want to lean more towards making her not so teenagery because she does kill people for a living but still I loved this story you are a great writer. Keep it up!! Update soon!!Poodles:)

MWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA I HAVE FOUND A WAY AROUND THE ONE REVIEW PER CHAPTER RULE! anyway this is Abby Sequioa and you had better UPDATESOON!

cool twist. I would still kill him anyway. doo do do.

Lovely and cold. perfect assassin story.

Nice story. Can't wait to read more.

This story is AWESOME! WRITE MORE! *holds sock up threatenly* MORE!! *please?*

UPDATE UPDATE I love this story! plz!

I lvoe the story! I hope you update soon!

You have to UPDATE!! *adds to favies* *adds to author alert* *adds to fav/storys* oops your already added. lol.

nice story...plz update soon!

gr8 job

i like this, it's not like anything else i've read in a while. i'll definatly read more when you post. love, Akasaha