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| specialinagoodway 2008-06-08 ch 2,  | abusehey this is my first review so here it goes I like the story it draws you in quickly one thing is that you start some sentences with the word and which I heard was bad but other than that it was great also please update soon :) |
| M.T. Stockton 2005-04-27 ch 1, | abuseVery intriguing. Vaguely puts me in mind of American Psycho, but written much more eloquently. I like the first-person voice, and that it still seems somehow detached, almost clinical at times - appropriate, really, for the character. It's too early, however, to say much of anything about the plot or the character development, other than I see lots of potential and look forward to reading more! BTW, thanks for the review :o) |
| Master D 2004-09-23 ch 1, anon. | abuseDamn! I thought you were joking about this dude. He really is crazy! Will the cops find this fool and shoot the mess outta him? Does he kill men and women or just women? He strikes me as a pervert. Good story. I like this one. Where's chapter 2? |
| The Crimson Angel Of Time 2004-09-12 ch 1, | abuse@Toph G: No blood & gore? Believe me, there's plenty, he's just getting warmed up! Stick around, you'll see. @Mr. A: He could care less about women in terms of sexual pleasures. It's killing that thrills him. @Abs No: I intend to keep going with this story. It's the first posted at FictionPress, but I wrote full notebooks of stories on this guy. To all of you, thanks for taking the time o review my work. |
| Toph Gonzalez 2004-09-12 ch 1, | abuseNo blood and gore? Aw... But I liked it anyway. I just love stories with killers/murderers/criminals as the main personas; delving into their mysterious psyche and all... I would like for you to continue the story, unless you really intended the cliffhanger. |
| mr. awsome 2004-09-10 ch 1, anon. | abuseit would make the story better if he would rape her |
| Absolutely nothingness 2004-09-07 ch 1, | abusecool id hope u keep going w/this dun stop its cool umm well i guess ima go now ^_^ peace |