|Reviews for Light and Dark|
| salsalsally 11/1/04 . chapter 1
This story tells the truth about racism in our society. Great piece of writing!
| 00Anonymous00 9/9/04 . chapter 1
Damn! This is great. I loved it. Excellent and very impressive! The paragraphs are a bit too long for my taste though, but hecks, it's still good!
| unjaundiced 9/6/04 . chapter 1
this was a very emotional and well described essay. i feel for tom.
you should work on your dialogue techinique though. when you have a conversation, you split up each person's part into a new paragraph. and if one person is speaking, but starts on a new topic, that becomes a new paragraph too.
it's a little complicated, i know.