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Reviews For: Shower Time

tatumli
2004-09-07
ch 1, anon.
abusefunfunfun! description is nice, but alexander with a rowel clad girl? for the ultimate unromantic? wow...
FicheCeist
2004-09-06
ch 1,
abuseI really like this story- although some of the sentence structure leaves a little to be desired. (never mind, i'm just picky, so you really don't have to pay me any mind.) But it's good!
~FicheCeist
Through Her Eyes
2004-09-06
ch 1,
abuseAn odd subject for a story, but adorable. Dreams make the best inspiration for writing stories. That's where most of mine come from. ..Most times that's a bad thing.
This had such a cute ending that I'm going to add it to my favorites.
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