update u scraggy mole ive been waiting since march u sadistic **

Josh

P.S. Great stroies keep up the good work

Hi, I just found this story and I think it’s really entertaining, heart wrenching, and very believable. I have become attach to each character. What an awesome idea you have I really hope you do get to your goal, which is to make it 35 stories. Each character you have created is unique and relatable. I really love this story because readers are actually going through with them their troubles, love, lost, trials and tribulations. You did an excellent job in showing how each character has grown and change throughout the years. I actually became a little emotional reading about Mariah, Garland and Jacob Valentine family life. Sasha is such a great character and the wisest. I am cheering for Jake and Mariah to make it because they both love each other but their relationship is complicated due to their past. Especially Mariah’s past I can understand her not being able to trust men, therefore, Jake has to be the most patient guy in the world and he is. I am so happy you finally have internet again and I look forward to reading more of The Gang. Keep up the good work and good luck.

I just finished reading your "The Gang" collection. You are a talented writer. I feel connected to these characters and I want to read more about them. I like how Paige and Morgan got together. I like and dislike how Sasha and LeeAnne are not together. I don't think that everyone in the Gang should just pair up (that would be VERY unrealistic), but I kind of feel that Sasha and LeeAnne should end up together. Mariah and Jake? I don't know. I think it works better if they don't know either. You describe emotion/feelings and thoughts VERY well, but you don't describe character and setting very well. You need to work on this so I can have better images of the characters as I read them! I really like how you've created the characters with separate identities and stayed true to that. Too many writers try to create different characters, but they all end up being the same. Alot of the things you write about come in bunches--a bunch of The Gang have problems with their dads, characters getting pregnant, too many new characters at once. One character gets abused and then the rest just seem to follow. You need to keep things confined to one character, like one character has this problem, not one then another and another and another (I do not mean confined, like no other character knows about it--unless that's just how it works for the story!). I don't like how the gang just keeps growing, but you do a good job of including all the characters and keeping their identities true so that I, the reader, do not have a problem keeping up with them. I like all the characters so I'm not saying delete some or that he or she should not be a part of the Gang. I'm just saying The Gang's getting too big. I do like how you did not forget about Connie when she moved! I'm not sure how I feel about The Gang's many (exaggeration!) interactions with The Club, though it cannot be avoided since they are friends with Val and that won't change.You need to watch your repitition. You find a good analogy and use it up in one chapter. It's not a big problem. Your stories are great anyway.I enjoy reading "The Gang" serial and hope you write many more stories! Maybe one day you'll actually get them published in book form!My favorite characters: Paige, Jake, and LeeAnn. Least favorite characters: Val, Sasha (what he's becoming), and Arizona.I used to not like Garland, but watching (or rather reading) him grow up is very interesting. I like reading how they're all growing up and changing. That is very realistic.Keep it up and post more soon, please!

I really like this series so far, but I was wondering, and not to be racist or rude, but I noticed that you really only have white people in this series, and since I'm mixed, I was wondering if you could put in another character named Amani Martinez who's black/hispanic? It would really cool if you did, but you don't have to. I hope to see another update soon! Keep up the great work! L8r...

Oh that was so great. I am waiting for the next story. Keep on updating. :)

Lovely chapter, dahling.

Keep on updating. This chapter wasn't 2 bad even though it was kinda sad. :)

Wow that was pretty rough and i was hoping they would end up 2gether. Keep updating. :)

That was pretty funny. Keep on updating. :)

That was pretty funny. Keep on updating. :)

That was such a great chapter. OMG! That was so funny about Morgan. Keep on updating. :)

That was a pretty funny chapter keep on updating. :)

This outta b good u could tell that Jake was high as a butterfly. Keep on updating. :)

Oh i know the party is going 2 rock. Keep updating. :)

Poor Mariah. That's terrible! Paige should have been more understanding, but Mariah should't have snapped at her...

I didn't see anything that was a typo or anything.