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| White Tea and Ginger 2005-11-21 ch 1,   | I like the last line, very subtly put but very heated. I love all of the taste things actually- the sugar and rainwater is a beautiful idea. The only bit I didn't get was the line 'flames of snow'. But still a cool oxymoron. Great piece. Keep up the great work. |
| ElizabethMary 2005-03-17 ch 1, | god dam! Anyone got a cig?Anyways very awesome as always!! |