wow, i love the first and last verse most, the last one especially though, so clever and the last line is amazing, i can really relate, it takes time to trust, i guess for me i just trust people as much as i have to, it takes a lot for me to trust someone totally, barriers i wont let down, but slowly it's getting better :) x weasel within x

(i feel very song - y now, you may have inspired me to write something!)

I have the same issues. I can see why it might mean a lot, to be that honest in a poem takes guts. Thanks for sharing.

Keep it up.

Yet another great work, you are really good. I love the repeating line "Should I trust?" it really added to the musing quality of the poem, great stuff
Keith Andrew

Beclieve me I know what you mean! I have way big trust issues with even my close friends. This really expressed the emotion of that. Awesome stuff