"A doll that a little kid is playing with

Who has no idea that there are people dying now"

That sounds very much like me.

And I love this one also.

OMG! i love this! and i agree with it. i actually have a poem thats not on here almost exactly like this. i'll post it later but still. i love how you say that there is no imbetween hell and earth, only hell and hevan and unfortunatly for us. we are in hell. man i have to say at the moment that this is my favorite. i paln to read more but at the moment, i like this.