I love your stories!

It's a good thing you have so many of them!

But their sad!

*runs to get box of kleenex*

It sounds more like you could change it into a song if you really wanted to. I really suck at reviewing because I don't really see fault in anyone's feelings expressed. I can however, tell you if there's anything that could be worded better or if punctuation could be used. In your case, the second line sounds funny "with a flowers", "that looked like it was made for him" also could use some work, "the thre years of are togetherness", etc. just revise it a little. I really like these ideas portrayed in this though. Sorry if I've bummed you out in any way, but constructive criticism is the only way to go.

Butterfly

Wow, sad ending but I like it.