Probably the most tragic thing I've read on this site in a while... Anyway, good job.

My word, how terrible...for both of them. Suicide really is a painful to see, hear, feel, know...

Great voice here. I lament these girls where ever they are.

omg that's so sad. very heartfelt poem. i love the imagry and how you put emotion into every line. its breathtaking realy. keep up the good

HEy I LOVE this peom!

Mm. I don't what to say, except that I would hate to go through this. It would be so... traumatizing. This is a good poem... I'm not quite sure what to say, except that yes, this really good.

Intense..in a good kind of way.