this was so powerful and haunting. beautifully written, these words stain the reader. i'll be thinking about this for days.

Wow... I'm speachless... Great poem, though it wasn't much of a poem, lol. But great none-the-less. You really decsribed everything to the point of being able to view it in your mind. Keep writing!
~K~
P.S. R&R one of mine?