Very well done, I truly love the way you described everything, it really appeals to me. Excellent.

Umm- okay- your summary and poem... a bit masochistic, yes? Well- at least in the mild likeness of it. I mean- it's just dripping with a very twisted, wrenched love and yet-"alomst" asking for more. I could be wrong. At any rate- excellent writing! Worthy of a grim romance between pain and the desire to be loved- and to love- at almost any price...