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| AlsoSprachOdin 2008-05-02 ch 13,  | abuseI clicked, I read, I approved. Pretty cool story, though Dirge for a Necromancer seems far more interesting. Stopped reading DfaN and read this when I got to the "Pike" chapter. And that was my Friday. Thanks for entertaining me. What a curious universe, this Zylx thing is. Humans being on bottom of the food chain is an interesting deviation from the typical Tolkien rip-off. But the food chain seems to be constituted mostly of predators and very little else, like... cows, or something else to be the bread and butter for all these dragons, vampires, wolves, gryphons, etc. On the subject of forgiveness vs. justice, or any other ethical matter (postulating for the sake of argument that there is such thing as ethical right or wrong): Go with Bentham's felicific calculus, every time. To someplace hot with what everyone else says. Favourite quote: “You shouldn’t hold these things inside, friend,” I could feel that creepy smile on my back. “Eventually they eat their way out, and then it’s very unpleasant and usually fatal.” Wisdom and macabre humour in one neat package. Very cool. |
| Meina Vonta Rayne 2005-09-02 ch 11, | abuseThat was depressing. I'm in keyboarding right now! ^_^ You see how much your literature means to me? Alot if I'm visiting during school hours. |
| Meina Vonta Rayne 2005-07-27 ch 10, | abuseI like this chapter the best. As for my favourite race? Vampires! Squee! |
| Meina Vonta Rayne 2005-07-11 ch 9, | abuse*squee* You may have had to threaten me... but seeing a pass-off of Mika was atually quite amusing. __ |
| Meina Vonta Rayne 2005-03-09 ch 7, | abuseGreat story. Da- Grigori is the way I'm best known. Wonderful! Addicting plot. Good luck with it, tavarishch. |
| Meina Vonta Rayne 2005-02-25 ch 6, | abuseI love the emotions used in the story. Very intriguing. DO finish soon, and try to read my story, 'Lost in a Dream.' |
| Meina Vonta Rayne 2005-02-25 ch 3, | abuseVery nice. Inovating dialouge, sharp wit and mesmerising mistique. I very much enjoy this story- it's quite a page-turner. Keep going! |
| Slahan's Creator 2005-01-22 ch 5, anon. | abuse*pulls Ashley aside* Alright- Vishnitt? Can you explain that for me. I'm quite offended that Lord Vishnu had his name so brashly insulted! I'm kidding. The story's wonderful, but you need to keep an eye out for those grammatical errors. I think that's the only thing I spotted that was out-of-place. I liked it alot... yes... *smacks Dante for thinking he can sense the aura of a swordsman* You'll have to explain that better- the aura is a color... explaining aggresiveness, fearfullness, lustfullness, et cetera, et cetera. I suppose the aura of a swordsma would be mixed, giving Dante more Perception and stronger build of character than I do believe you intended... just a wiccan's note, take no heed... |
| Slahan 2004-12-30 ch 4, anon. | abuseIt was awesome... horizen=horizonforeget=forgetSOrry- I like being a little complaining corpse f*, and you know that. No- not you, Raetonus knows. O.o. Anyways, brilliance, pure brilliance. Write more |
| Jairyanna 2004-09-07 ch 1, | abuseEven though I dont normally like !st person stories, I thought that this one was v good. Lots of places where u could expand. Get writing, why dont u!?!?! :) (im a nice person, really.) |