Great poem. I like the last three lines, prolly because they appeal to my love of nature. You're a wonderful writer.

Please R&R some of my work. I'll return the favor.

Wow, this poem was amazing, I really really enjoyed it. I can picture everything that you are trying to capture. Great job!

aw, that was touching, i love it, esp that last line and using the parentheses so effectively, i love the use of them, very timeless and pained, a muchly esquisite (my spelling ability has fled me, so youll have to forgive that) mood, excellent job

oh that's beautiful. I love the lines:
Perhaps I'm wrong,
But the future doesn’t show the crystal stars
That led us to each other.
Well done!