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| Serendipitous Passage 2005-04-27 ch 1,  | abuseGreat poem. I like the last three lines, prolly because they appeal to my love of nature. You're a wonderful writer. Please R&R some of my work. I'll return the favor. |
| charisma1525 2005-02-22 ch 1, | abuseWow, this poem was amazing, I really really enjoyed it. I can picture everything that you are trying to capture. Great job! |
| not sure yet 2004-11-22 ch 1, | abuseaw, that was touching, i love it, esp that last line and using the parentheses so effectively, i love the use of them, very timeless and pained, a muchly esquisite (my spelling ability has fled me, so youll have to forgive that) mood, excellent job |
| myno 2004-09-07 ch 1, | abuseoh that's beautiful. I love the lines: Perhaps I'm wrong, But the future doesn’t show the crystal stars That led us to each other. Well done! |