not a big fan of love poetry i admit but that was one good piece of work..

it rhymes and doesnt make me gag and i think thats a good thing..:)

beautiful

AW!! lol i was eevn awwing at the summary cos i knew EXACTLY who this was about! you gotta write more of these, i love cute stuff!
*grin* and then you gotta show him them... SHOW HIM! thats an order! *pouts*