great job on this story i read it all in one sitting keep it up

i really hope that you havent given up on this story because i like it a lot. one thing that you should look out or is repeating the same word more than once in a sentence. for example, you have a lot of sentences where you say "and" like three times and you really shouldnt. other than that i like the way you write and the fact that all of your characters speak differently and i have a feel for their individuality. please update soon!

Your story is great hope you update again!

you. must. go. on.

Don't leave me in a lerch here, what is going to happen next, Please...

this is getting interesting, I do like the dark angry vampire.

This is a really great story, and I must say, you have me hook, line, and sinker! As for critcism, I have very little, but here goes. You have a few typos and spelling errors, and in chapters 17 & 18, you introduce new elements into the story without explaining them. So yeah, an explaination would be extememly helpful. I hope you won't leave me hanging.

Wonderful story! It's sad that you haven't updated in a while, though. This story is definitely worth reading. I'm gonna add this to my favorite stories list. You should keep going. I wanna know what happens!!

This is a very good story. I love the concept you have going for it, and I can say for sure that I can't wait for more. The only criticism I have is that in some places it seems a little awkward as to word choice and repitition, but that's just me being picky. Keep it up :)

I am loving the story, dont leave me hanging too long!

lol, wow, you still got it in you. but i dont! ..well, not yet anyway.i give two thumbs up! -though because i havent been on here for decades i need to reread it again to get the idea.keep up the good work! ;)

well done on this

~your disease

I love this story do please write more of it or at least give it a suitable ending.

r u not goin to finish this story?it would be nice to know either waythanks candi

whoa, your descriptions are beautiful, especially when describing the wings! =D I want some!! ^_^ You did a beautiful job on this chapter, with no grammer/spelling errors so great job! Keep it up! I'll be waiting for the next chapter.

~The Goddess of Night