I love it. I love the way its told and the words used.

Beautifully written.
The ancient medieval feeling is evident throughout; the beauty of horse and countryside effectively displayed.
Wonderful.

wow.. your mother is very talented... awesome awesome poem

touching, and it flows nicely. your mom did an awesome job
-firehair

¡I see that the sins of the daughter have been visited on the mother! *Smile of Happy Thoughts* Your mother's poem is well-structured, flows-well and is very descriptive. Nice job. -m-