This chapter is excellent!

YAY! updates! this chapter was beautifully written and i can't wait to see what happens next! keep up the good work!

Oh Mi gosh,

I'm terribly sorry to be one of the people who didn't review the entire time I was reading this, but this story is so incredible, i couldn't stop until I finished it. I am crazy in love with this story, i've even had dreams about it. (Odd, I know, but bear with me). The writing is incredible and your descriptions are amazingly detailed, just perfect enough to get the perfect vision in your head. Goodness, i love this story. keep up the good work!

I can't wait till you update!

Thank you for continuing. This chapter was interesting, to say the least. Please continue!

Hi, I just wanted to tell you that I love this story. I've been reading it since the begining, and the plat is really coming together now. It's sort of like a movie. thanks, and I hope you keep on writing.-Christi

wow. this is such an incredible story! its messed up, deep, and hilarious in such messed up ways. keep it up... the only advice i would think to give is to make sure you arent taking this around and around in circles. well, seeya!

DAMNIT! BEAUTIFUL STUFF MAN! BRILLIANT!

HOLYSHIT! THIS IS ONE KICK ASS STORY!

Gaah, the cliffhangers. ;_; How you torcher me...oh but how I love this story and keep waiting on end for its updates. So glad you go to it.

Lets see, what can I say without spoilers.. Humm, as always great chapter, it was nice and lengthy and contain alot in its own way. I like how we're getting to know more about some the characters and such, and some of the side people. And as always I'll be here waiting and stalking for I am one sick puppy!

Mikie.

I just want you to know that I simply adore this story. I read it nonstop from start to end. I really hope that you decide to continue with it. And as for those prequels that you were thinking about writing, I would love to read them too.

this chapter wasnt really my favorite to be honest. there's really not very much information given on chocolate or anyone else other than the vision of sophette and her father.. it's very well written and all.. it just doesn't hold my attention for too long.. can't wait for the next chapter!baby dyke rae

Yay, yet another wonderful update. Seemed a tad short with not as much crammed in or something, but heck I love it anyways. Haha, so much I'd say but I think I'll wait as to not give spolier. And now back to stalking mode.

Mikie.

QUIT LEAVING ME HANGING! ahg! you're driving me insane lol. amazing chapter btw.. i just wish you would finish the whole story dyke rae

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