whoa...

I think I liked this chapter the most... it wasn't as confusing as all the others, simply because it was nicely written. Yanno... grammar, and all ^^;.

"I also protect the world for him. To make it safer for him because he can barely handle it as it is." that was SO sweet. Really. And I'm very sorry to get Seifer and Squall into this, but it would fit great in an SxS story too. It made me think of Seifer saying it, and Squall being all helpless and... cute. *hits herself and mumbles ; I should stop reading yaoi...* Eh heh ^^;

Well, very nice chapter.*hugs*

Well... this is.. simply.. breathtaking. I LOVE it ! I'm quite speechless... but GODS, it's WONDERFUL ! Noticed you used the name "Purgatory", too... hmm... ^^ interesting ^^.
Well, good job *hugs you* !

Good short story. You did that for school? What grade did you get? I'm sure it's a high grade. Again, good work.

Sweet ^^ It's cool... loved the last sentences... *a lot* ^^ so.. overly dramatic and such... *love* it ^^
Nice going ^^ Keep it up ^^
Toodles,
*me*