Here's a review. I hate myself and want to die.
The pathetic fallacy at the start is a fitting way to start it. The sub texts you placed within this are incredible. Russian revolution? Greif, loss, rememberence and love. Ironically it is everything you don't say that makes the piece a great one. Mystery and suspense and ignorance of what is really happening. It's very hard for an author to under write. You pulled it off very well.
Over and out.