Beautiful. The feelings were all right there, I could feel them coming out of the poem, very powerful stuff.

Keep it up.

wow, this was just... wow! i like it, very well written and sad.. beautiful!
or as we norwegians say: kjempebra! :)
i can really relate to this.. reminds me of the boy i wrote about.
great work!
love Zai

I know how you feel...I was remenising some bad stuff today and...nevermind long story but this is a poem i defenitely needed to read right now. Thanks and awesome writing

nice, i like it. and i dont much care for poetry so that's sayin' something.