I must say it was funny! Dreams are strange things :)Silent River

Wonderfully entertaining. Great flow, and rhythm. The descriptions and eloquence gave it the dreamlike quality I believe you were aiming for, as it was based on the dream that you describe in your A/N at the end of the work. You captured it perfectly.
Very Well Done
Keep Writing!
F.C
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