I knew I shouldnt have started to read a story that hadn't been updated in a while. Prepare for yelling: OMG WHY HAVE YOU NOT WRITTEN MORE YOU CRAZY WOMAN?!I love it! It reminds me of firelord a wee bit, but that is no bad thing!You need to call that inspiration back to you, mate, and at least write a next chapter! (btw, your pacing seems better than normally here!) Love it,sweet. MReally truly.

Wow. That death scene was so wonderfully done. You handled it with extreme grace and sensitivity. This was lovely; there were only a few grammatical/spelling errors that I saw, but the content was wonderful. Keep writing.