I should have reviewed this before, but I didn't have an account.Go Lindy! I like this story. But its sad! *sniff* [stef]

I read in the 13-15 but I wanted to review here too since I didn't get all my opinions to you on LJ. I love the metaphorical meaning to "dirt". That's brilliant. I also adore how you call the "perfect" people "angels". There's something oxymoronic about it.

i have now reviewed all of ur storys (stories?) go me!! i lvoe this one!1 so sad! very good ending..the im just there bit..so sad..

its wierd but cool

bleak. I like the use of dirt as a phobia item. One can almost thing the psycchotic little girl's father may have murdered her mother.

Very good story. Well written, and it really holds your attention. Honestly, this is great. If you had to change one thing, I might rework that sentance that says "I'm not an outcast." I don't remember the exact wording, but it's someting like that, and I'm just wandering, if she's not an outcast, what are the outcasts?