such a sweet one, i love this one the most so far...it's always good to think about being loved by someone. well, i have to go now but keep writing!-anime freakizoid X^_^X

Hm... the ryhmes seemed VERY forced, try not to stick to suh a ridged scheme... it gets old in about four lines. The text between the lines was at times great, but fell short often and were only to be destroyed once the Inevitable came (ryhmes). You had some good language in this, facade is a word I like to see, and yeah, romance isn't a very wordy genre. It was mediocre for a romance poem.