Dark humour. Made me chuckle - I love the the rhyme scheme: the loose structure of it adds to the humour.

Great little piece. Well done :) Please check out some of my stuff if you have a moment to spare :)

Flawless. The wit was spot on.

LOL That's wonderful! It's funny and cute- even the first verse! I love this poem, it's so upbeat and light even though its about this person's life that's falling apart.

Lol, this was just plain funny. I loved it. It was awesome. One of my favorites, definetly. I wish I had a favorites dedicated just to you, because there's so many I love but just don't have enough room to add! Anyway, you're amazing and keep writing! :D

Good. Funny. Witty. *smile* -m-

I love the way you wrote this, it just caught my eye and held my attention (and I usually don't review). Good work!