We. Pretty. I like this alot and plz forgive me for taking so long to read your stuff. I've been kinda lazy lately. Awesome work. Later.

This is so good buddy! Beautiful and the way you mixed the rhyme scheme is killa! Great job you never stop amazing me!

Very nice poem! It does have a lot of meeting for anyone. That be someone trying to find love or those that have already! I hope to read more of your work!