*Applause* very very good!

Poor werewolf by, he is a werewolf right? Anyway why is he helping the hunter, doesn't seem like he's doing it for the moneny.

It's ok. Longer paragrahs and more description may be. Not just descriptions of the characters, a good background description would give a better sense of atmosphere, place and time. Otherwise there isn't really anything wrong with it. Try and make people care about your characters, it helps.