:P I know how that feels. I liked it though. Nice job, the "it's stitched on my sleeve (scabbed over)" was a really cool line. I liked your use of parentheses.

Woah, a left-aligned poem...threw me there. Great job, I like this one. Cunning use of parentheses.

Nice, I like it, at the beggining though, and at the end you were kind of rambaling, like this is stupid kind of feel but it got a lot better in the middle, I loved the descriptions and metaphors that you created here, very effective and fascinating piece, Keep up the good work.
Much love,
Juliet.