 emerald 2005-07-14 . chapter 1 *SIGH* amazing peice of work...so touching too...and the guy is HOT! and NICE - wow a rare combination:D and good addition with the wheelchair... |
 Dr. Beowulf 2004-12-09 . chapter 1You have called me a goth and, by doing so, have made a mortal enemy. I shall track you down and eat your children, soul, and candy. But, until hell gives me that liscense back, I'll just review your stories. This was good and way too much like what goes on inside my head. I, of course, will seek vengance for the "goth" remark, but keep writing until we ... I get to you. (Laugh Laugh) |
 Diana Shore 2004-10-07 . chapter 1Very romantic and touching; definately tugged at my heart.
Take care, D. |
 Tsukinani 2004-09-29 . chapter 1Thats SO SWEET!
We Could Be Gone |
 SpawnMeister666 2004-09-13 . chapter 1This is quite sweet. I noticed one or two minor mistakes, but nothing truly important.
They are so minor in fact that when I do as requested and send the edited version back, you may struggle to notice what I've changed!
Well done you.
Spawny
P.S. If you're such a stalker, and I'm your editor, is it not about time you dedicated something to me?
Just kidding of course. Well done with this anyway, and I promise to e-mail you the edited version soon |
 Belerphon 2004-09-10 . chapter 1;-; Thats soo swet! ;-; I wanna read more things like this.. *nods* ^-^ once again you've touched me with your work. |
 Ms. Mya 2004-09-10 . chapter 1Aw..that was so sweet, it got me to smile, even when I have a crappy/busy weekend ahead of me. Thanks for lifting my spirits up a bit. :)
"Nothing exited but only the two of them." - that part sounded weird, did you mean to say existed? ;)
Ms. Mya |
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