this fic was so gr8, u did a gr8 job ;)

Great job! I had lost this story and i was looking for it forever because I had lost the title, and when i finally found it, I had jumped for joy. I think you did an awesome job, and I encourage you to write more stories like this when you can! You have my praise!Blu_Skye

hi psychoaddict.. long time without knowing about you!your stories are very very good, i didnt know you like writting.. ok, i hope you have millions of stories like this one, you write like a pro! lolsaludos! y perdon por el ingles chafa jeje! pasa por mi pag algun dia.

wow! that was so good! and its true. most ppl r like that and do think that they love a person. lol

Oh my God! Mike and Marietta are the only two I like in the story!! Well, don't get me wrong, I like Sylvie, I just think she is really dumb for forgiving Alan so much. But it only makes the story better! Anyway, I started crying when I read that Mike died... I never cry over a story. Great work.

So the plot thickens! Oh my gosh you have to update soon or i'll go mad with curiosity. the suspense is killing me, not literally ofcourse, but you know what i mean. any way, good story, i can't wait to read more.

she is pretty stupid... that's all i have to say about that... continue reading i shall... next chapter ->

O! I knew it! what a jack **! Humph! I feel sorry for Marietta she's nice and everything's getting thrown into her face. Pff. It's not her fault. (crosses arms over chest and frowns) I don't like people like that, they ** me off... whatever, i guess i should read more and see if he really is an ** like he is coming across as or if he is just "special" and i use that term very losely...

o... Now we get to see the real side of alan... my guess is that he is a jerk, but what the heck do i know? anyway, im really interested in this story. its pretty good right now and im gonna go and read more and when i finish i shall review again. peace~

'That night, I danced like I had never danced before. Alan turned out to be a pretty good dancer too. He danced so close to me that I could feel his warm body against mine. As I danced with him, all I could think about was that I was in love with this guy. After a whole hour of dancing, I got tired, so Alan and I went back to where Marietta was sitting.' In 5 sentences, u use 'dance' 6 times! Try and find different words like 'move'.

i really like the story so far, but a couple of CC points. You tend to repeat yourself, espesh with 'cute guys' and 'gorgeous guys'. Try some more descriptive words. also, Sylvie knows his name is Alan before he even says so.i would say keep going, but i'm on the first chapter of 24, so it would seem you already have!

o...whats behind the door...what about that girl that claimed she was alan was her boyfriend...

may i note that alan is a **!!oops i said that "aloud"

hey update soon! i'm wetting mai pants waiting!

I really think you should end it between Sylvie and Alan... he's an **, and its really bugging me!

goodkeep writin and longer chapter please!