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Reviews For: Tenth of December

do not resuscitate
2004-09-27
ch 1,
so desolately wonderful. your words here resonate, echo as if over a frozen tundra, running and whispering for miles.
JazzPizza
2004-09-16
ch 1,
Excellent and specific imagery, bringing forth a frigid air. And again, nice line structure.
To try to be constructive, though, I think punctuation was a little bit underused. Not devastatingly so, but I think you could have worked more with it.
Paste on Smile
2004-09-13
ch 1,
eep...stunning...
if sighing
2004-09-11
ch 1,
Just beautifully written, I just loved some of the phrasing in this poem.
~dusk
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