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| Reviews for Alone are the Stars |
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  EKR 9/13/04 . chapter 1 oh me like |
| Evelyn Eisele 9/13/04 . chapter 1 I'm thinking maybe the last line could be revised a bit-it would seem the stars are the complete ones, and THAT'S why they're alone... Maybe you could change it to "As small and incomplete as me"-then you'd have a nice bit of irony there. I like it a lot generally, though! |
 Manuel Fajar 9/10/04 . chapter 1¡You, oh delightful carbon composite, are a Star! What a wonderful contrast and image; and a piercing question—¿Huge fusion burning bright or fusion's residue, which would you rather be? -m- p.s. inspired by your ray of light— Huge fusion burns bright,— Little carbon walks upright,— Only one sees moon . . . 11 sep 04 -m- |
