|Reviews for Alone are the Stars|
| EKR 9/13/04 . chapter 1
oh me like
| Evelyn Eisele 9/13/04 . chapter 1
I'm thinking maybe the last line could be revised a bit-it would seem the stars are the complete ones, and THAT'S why they're alone... Maybe you could change it to "As small and incomplete as me"-then you'd have a nice bit of irony there. I like it a lot generally, though!
| Manuel Fajar 9/10/04 . chapter 1
¡You, oh delightful carbon composite, are a Star! What a wonderful contrast and image; and a piercing question—¿Huge fusion burning bright or fusion's residue, which would you rather be? -m-
p.s. inspired by your ray of light—
Huge fusion burns bright,—
Little carbon walks upright,—
Only one sees moon . . .
11 sep 04 -m-