ahh nice statueness, i must be addicted, well i believe I've run out of constrution critisism oh well!

Nice language. It paints a pretty picture.

Great poem! Very powerful. I'd put you on my fav writer's list, but my computer has been messing up and I haven't been able to put anyone on it lately. Anyway, great work! Keep it up!

*puts on fave stories list because it has just grabbed her* Beautiful.

hey... nice work! it sent shivers up my spine... keep up the great work!
White Rain

That was great. It would of been nice to close it with the same beging relating to the sea but i loved it i did. Great Work !!